Dear Breeze

dear breeze
blow gently
through my room
as I sleep tonight
so I do not waken.
I’m tired, and
I’m worn
I’m worn,
I’m tired, and
so I do not waken
as I sleep tonight:
through my room
blow gently
dear breeze


a second offering for the “breeze” quadrille prompt at dVerse…and an attempt at writing in mirror image.


9 thoughts on “Dear Breeze

  1. The mirror image really works well for this, the repeated lines lulling me to sleep…….well, almost…..there’s still those darn crickets.

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