NaPoWriMo Day 8 – Sevenling (A Wild Rose)

A wild rose holds
a fragrance, a thorn,
a bumble bee

an old truck
has rust, flat tires,
and a broken window

beauty in odd places


written for NaPoWriMo Day 8, where the prompt is “flowers”. Also sharing this at dVerse as another submission to the “sevenlings” prompt.

Dear NaPoWriMo participants: why not come check out dVerse…some wonderful poetry prompts there year round, and dear dVerse participants, if you’re not doing NaPoWriMo…why not?


8 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo Day 8 – Sevenling (A Wild Rose)

  1. Great use of the two prompts. I love the comparison between the jaggedness of both items, the thorns and sting of the bee and the broken edges of the truck. Two very dissimilar items on the surface but more alike when you study them.

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